The Hands That Choke Us.

Have you ever felt like there isn't enough hours in the day. I kinda felt that way last night. I felt like there wasn't enough hours in the day to get everything done. I wanted to sit and write poetry. I wanted to write my ideas for movies. But I couldn't because I had so much to do and I felt tired. Well, I wrote a poem expressing this thought. Oh and by the way if you haven't heard of or read Jack Micheline. I suggest you check him out he is a great great poet.

So here's my poem....

The Hands that Choke Us

I wish there were more hours in the day

To write poetry

To live life

To play video games

To watch movies

But instead we are restricted by time

Restricted hand that choke us

And tell us when we are tired

I wish there were more hours in the day

So that I can complete novels

And write hours upon hours of poetry

Instead the clock face stares at me and my

Eyes begin to feel like throw pillows in the back

Of my head

The Hands that Choke Us

Burn away our entertainment

I must wake early tomorrow

But yet I want to complete this poem

I want to write more poems

I want to read more poets

And feed my eyes

It’s daily dose of

Sweets

The words

Of Jack M.

Spice my eyes.

I’ve become a fan.

But yet there isn’t enough time

As the Hands begin to choke me.






So I know I need to start commenting on blogs in order to get comments. I will start commenting if you do the same. But let me know what you think about the restrictions of time.

1 comment:

  1. I also have my own view on the restrictions of time. Where yours are passion based, mine are more centered around what I can accomplish before time runs out. oh to be 24 again! Lol excellent topic for a poem! I love it :)

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